Gender: Female Ethnicity: Asian
Public High school
Class of 2008
GPA: 4.0

I have a strong academic background and a very well-developed talent in music, which was evident from my extracurricular activities, my participation in prestigious symphonies, recitals at credible performance halls, and a professional CD of many musical pieces in my repertoire. My essay tied my interests in music and related it to my prospective concentrations in history and political science, demonstrating the holistic approach I take to academics.